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©2008-2009 ~HeatherTheRabbit
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This is for Terry Rose,
I hope you like my contest entry.
Terry did the out line.

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Mmhmm, I can't deny you've tried hard here.

Dispite the wide assortment, I think the colours work very well together.

I think the wings look very effective in black.

Again, like I said on ~Zaparc's, the lineart is rly letting this picture down. (Oopsie) It does need to be darkened or completly removed. (Where I've used the linetool you can see the blobs).

There are some white gaps near the braclets and on the neck of the top, but apart from that, it looks quite good.

I'd ask you pay more attention to the eyes too. (Search for Anime Eyes and see what comes up).

I think this is very good for an MS Paint job.

Here are my scores:
*Neatness______________5
*Use of colours______________8
*Effort placed into it______________9
*Overall look______________6

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l o v e L o l i t a ? ~Loli-Club
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Here are my scores:
*Neatness______________6
*Use of colours______________8
*Effort placed into it______________7
*Overall look______________8

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"You blew up the world I built for us, destroyed our secret universe."
I'm Samus Aran in the DA Crazy-for-Characters Crew!
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Cheers, that gives Hayley 57/80

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l o v e L o l i t a ? ~Loli-Club

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